Revised Post to Peer Reviewers

Yay! The fine cut is done.

Here is the link to my fine cut!

This is basically my rough cut but heavily edited, so if you have any suggestions let me know . :)

A major weakness would be part of my form. I quoted a couple things from Twitter in my second body paragraph, but I have never used social media in my essays before so I am not sure how to properly cite it. I added in-text citations for each quote, but I am not sure if I did it right.

Some strengths include finally adding a Works Cited and real in-text citations. Compared to my rouch cut, I added a lot of stuff to make sure that the audience understood where I was coming from, what I thought was right, and why I thought that. So hopefully this is clearer now.